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真是不错。特别是宁宁和王芳威胁老母跳脱衣舞最后一起混战那段，淫乱气氛烘托得淋漓尽致，实在经典。
美中不足，如此长文，在感情描写和人物内心的变化上笔墨不足，床戏前期心里铺垫较少，有点遗憾。作为一个长篇，灵与肉应该并重，就更能吸引人了。

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