rextan 发表于 2012-1-27 03:21   全显示 1楼
很不错 才3章 情节把握很好
个人推荐先让男主和城城的母亲好上 然后再到自己的母亲 然后母亲和城城  最后大交换
又或者城城把他母亲蒙住眼让男主上(这个情节好多小说都有,突显城城内心的阴暗面),然后城城灌醉男主母亲偷上,男主发现了但不阻止,等城城走后自己再````

哈哈 都是看别个小说情节胡乱拼凑的 希望给LZ提供更多的路线

LZ的双视角 真的很好  很强大我觉得比单方面视角描写更有代入感  当然这需要更多的心理描写和情感描写了
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